Rough Cut Feedback

These are the points we were told to change by Ms Blackborow:

• Move the titles from the end
• Linking Shot needs to be shot
• Slower opening, more of a reveal with a location – Shoot the street establishing shot
• George Romero – Night of the Living Dead opening (watch for inspiration)
• Stronger reaction from forensics
• More forensic interaction – chemical scars
• Emphasise difference in female body
• Show complete shock of soldier between montage and body finding
• Smooth track into soldier kill